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I said birthday KISS, not KICK

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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 03-17-2003 06:20 AM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for inkedgoddess


48 candles
came and went....

and not a word from you,

no surprise though,

so disappointment
doesn't hang too heavily
right now,

i hoped though,

for a ray of light,
to somehow pierce through
your dungeon of deepening depression,
where the magic smoke of dragons,
has become your faithful lover,

i wished for you to show love again,
the way you sadly told me,
you feared that you've forgotten,

i walked the path of leaves
today,
where fantasy and reality
finally came together for us,

novembers leaves
lay withered now,
surrounding barren trees,
standing still in thick ice,
waiting for a touch of spring,

48 candles
came and went,
again,

i wished for love,

i wished to release myself
from playing the sungoddess
to any more frozen trees,

i too am tired of standing still,

i wished for new love
to come,
and find me.............


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-17-2003 06:58 AM).]

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SmartChick
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1 posted 03-17-2003 07:16 AM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

New love will come to you my friend. And, I hope it is a true and everlasting one for you.
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2 posted 03-17-2003 07:38 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

nice wish..and do hope it finds you...

Aenimal
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3 posted 03-17-2003 08:17 AM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Here's to the abolishment of birthdays. Here Here.
And Mish, may you find it soon
regards2you
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4 posted 03-17-2003 10:13 AM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you



Michele,

The title belies the poem. Standing still, warming the frozen does take time for seeds of love to sprout.
Hang in there, spring is around the corner, may it bring you a sense of renewal and love you seek. Enjoy the variety of your poetry.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 03-17-2003 10:48 AM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

love will find you
Earth Angel
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6 posted 03-17-2003 11:27 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Well, here's a great big hug for the last 48 years....and another one for the next 48!

Sounds like a whole lotta under-appreciation going on here! You deserve better--and better you shall find!

Warm belated birthday hugs,
EA
littlewing
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7 posted 03-17-2003 11:51 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Michele:

i wished to release myself
from playing the sungoddess
to any more frozen trees,

The sungoddess you will be - always - let everything else stay frozen and breathe . . . - it is Spring - time for change - you deserve it - truly - I loved this as I do all of your writing xxoo

(oh and that lonely birthday feeling - yea - that just passed me by too - keep faith and I dont mean in you know who - in yourself always and the rest will follow)  
kayjay
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8 posted 03-17-2003 11:52 AM       View Profile for kayjay   Email kayjay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kayjay

We always wonder why something so simple for us to give is so hard for another to notice.  I liked this a lot..and HB from one with a lot more candles on the cake.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Jason Lyle
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9 posted 03-17-2003 11:54 AM       View Profile for Jason Lyle   Email Jason Lyle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jason Lyle

" I love it when a woman says lay it on me baby", nice write.
Jason
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10 posted 03-17-2003 01:36 PM       View Profile for Flower   Email Flower   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Flower

Birthdays can be a real pain, that's for sure. Hope today and tomorrow are better for you.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

inkedgoddess
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11 posted 03-17-2003 06:53 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

thanks for the nice words
BluesSerenade
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12 posted 03-17-2003 11:12 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Hope is a double edged sword!
After all a girl can only hold out for so long.

You're getting better all the time girlielocks~ so chalk it up to his loss!

Happy Birthday Michele~ I'm always a day late or two, (the story of my life)  but the thought remains the same.
inkedgoddess
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13 posted 03-17-2003 11:20 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

thanks blues,
for the nice wishes,
Midnitesun
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14 posted 03-18-2003 01:17 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Oh, not another candle without a flame!
so sorry M'shell. Dangit, I do understand this tune.
But Happy Month to you anyway. You do know you get the whole month don't you?
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15 posted 03-18-2003 02:19 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Michele, I love this, and the way you have of telling it like it is.

And, don't know when your birthday was, but Happy Birthday, Lady.  

Heart Hugs,
Ethel
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16 posted 03-18-2003 05:39 AM       View Profile for bklynboy   Email bklynboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bklynboy

I hope you had the happiest of birthdays!. Remember, you are not getting older, just better!!! A cliche I know but true. Appreciate each and every birthday, its an event denied many too soon. And finally, love could be right around the corner, or behind the closed door. Maybe the next FedEX or UPS guy????
ctowen
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17 posted 03-18-2003 06:26 AM       View Profile for ctowen   Email ctowen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ctowen's Home Page   View IP for ctowen

48 candles??? ..... that's a lot of sunshine!
   Must have had the entire fire department on call!! (he,he,...)

    Hope your day went well .... and many more to follow.
       Happy, happy .....  xx/oo
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18 posted 03-18-2003 11:31 AM       View Profile for KristieSue   Email KristieSue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KristieSue's Home Page   View IP for KristieSue

here's a birthday toast...

"to being kicked and bumping into someone to heal those wounds and love..."

Happy Birthday and best wishes for love!
ThisDiamond
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19 posted 03-18-2003 12:24 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

We never know what will come of the perfectly preserved heartbeats of November...something tells me that such clarity will breath a blessed sigh in spring.
Hugs to you my friend.  ThisDiamond
JamesMichael
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20 posted 03-18-2003 03:29 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

You say kiss and I think kick...its all in the attidude...hope you have a happy birthday...with kisses...James
choshi
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21 posted 01-18-2004 07:41 PM       View Profile for choshi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for choshi

i wished to release myself
from playing the sungoddess
to any more frozen trees,


Poignant Inkgoddess.....

In winter's sunlight,
seemingly melting icicles
only grow longer.

~C

Artic Wind
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22 posted 01-29-2008 10:09 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

I love birthdays!

ARCTIC WIND
 
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