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Silver_Tryst
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0 posted 2003-03-17 12:37 PM


This is about a friend of mine, Kristin, our relationship has been kinda weird, but we have never stoped being friends, She is my Guardian Angel..and i dedicate this poem to her...

An Angel's Will.......

I don't think you will
ever fully understand
how you've touched my life
and made me who I am.

I don't think you could ever know
just how truly special you are
that even on the darkest nights
you are my brightest star.

I don't think you will ever fully comprehend
how you've made my dreams come true
or how you've opened my heart
to love and the wonders it can do.

You've allowed me to experience
something very hard to find
unconditional love that exists
in my body, soul, and mind.

I don't think you could ever feel
all the love I have to give
and I'm sure you'll never realize
you've been my will to live.

You are an amazing person
and without you I don't know where id be.
Having you in my life
completes and fulfills every part of me.

© Copyright 2003 Shayne Kenichi - All Rights Reserved
Little_One
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since 2003-03-16
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1 posted 2003-03-17 12:42 PM


Shayne,
That touched me....I hope that you know that I will always be ther for you and that im here...no matter what

Love always and forever
Your little one

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-03-17 02:54 AM


very touching
littlewing
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3 posted 2003-03-17 02:05 PM


You guys are so sweet - lovely writing and what a testament to friendship and love - Ill be looking for the both of you here xxoo
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
4 posted 2003-03-17 03:24 PM


That was a lovely dedication. I hope to read more of you.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-03-17 03:34 PM


Very loving words for your lady friend. Sounds a little like more than friendship to me. In fact, it sounds a lot like me and my True Love did until about 4 1/2 years ago before we admitted that we had fallen in love with each other. He and I are still best friends as well as everything else to each other.

Well, I didn't intend to say all that, but it reminded me so much of me and him back then..and now, too!!!  

Heart hugs to you both,
Ethel.....garysgirl  

Silver_Tryst
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6 posted 2003-03-17 11:32 PM


I want to say thanks to all of you who read my poetry and thanks to kristin for being there for me

Shayne

Rdz9
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since 2003-03-16
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7 posted 2003-03-18 10:56 PM


Shayne, unlike most of these people, i have been able to se you two together, and this poem reflects what i saw perfectly. Nice write my friend.
Silver_Tryst
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8 posted 2003-03-19 04:07 PM


Thanks Rdz......it means alot
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