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Little_One Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 34montana |
Angels We are together every time I hear the angel’s sing Times of anger and hurt float away on the angel’s wing As time floats by Loving you makes the angel’s cry Every smile from you makes the angels shed a tear That smile brings hope and calms all fear Looking into your eyes makes me fall into a bliss So does every look, touch and kiss Promise me there will be no more pain And no more tears falling down like rain Being with you feels so good and so right It’s just not fair that for you I have to fight I wish I could be everything you need me to be So your life would be less troublesome and carefree Sometimes I wish you could hold me in your arms Just being there with you puts me out of life’s harms So every time an angel whispers in your ear Think of me and pray that I’m near |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This sounds like what Liam tells me everyday.I can totally relate. This is so romantic. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
hey, I love the poem, i can relate with a special person in my life, one that i dont really show just how much she means to me, Great Shayne |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Little One - Welcome to PIP! I liked this -is lovely: Times of anger and hurt float away on the angel’s wing and can much relate xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! You're going to enjoy your time here, Little_One... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is so lovely in its sweet sincerety of heart and its devotion. Welcome to Poetry Land "little one" so nice to have you here with us.  If I am right ... If I can be ... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome, dear Little One! A lovely first post! May this be the first of many yet to come! Warm, welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 I know you are going to love it here Kristin! Beautiful first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Enjoyed your first post!! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Welcome to Passions!!!!! Enjoyed this piece....heartfelt and sincere!!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
"So does every look, touch and kiss Promise me there will be no more pain And no more tears falling down like rain" Beautiful language, great style. Nice write. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
littleone, sorry I'm late welcoming you to our home. I really enjoyed your first post. And,  Hugs,  Ethel, |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
little one very nice I can relate beautiful imagery [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (03-23-2003 01:50 AM).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to Passions, and you made a very nice entrance with Angles. Well done! Charisma |
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Little_One Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 34montana |
Thanks everyone for reading my poetry...it means alot Kristin |
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