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Silver_Tryst
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since 2003-03-10
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0 posted 2003-03-16 05:39 PM


Feelings

its that feeling i get when you are around,
you seem to speak to my heart without making a sound,
You lift me up to the highest of stars,
In the gentle cradle of your arms,
I think its the way you look in my eyes,
Thoses gentle sighs,
Thoses silent cries,
Thoses loving ties,
I feel these things when im with you,
And i know in my heart these feekings are true,
We have been givin the chance to start a new,
Where we go now is up to you,

© Copyright 2003 Shayne Kenichi - All Rights Reserved
Rdz9
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since 2003-03-16
Posts 142
MT, USA
1 posted 2003-03-16 05:42 PM


Smooth. Nice flowing write.
Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
2 posted 2003-03-16 05:51 PM


Nice write, and welcome.
Jason

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-03-16 05:54 PM


Enjoyed...James
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