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Open Poetry #25

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Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

0 posted 2003-03-16 03:48 PM

I woke last night and went outside
to remember the day i heard you had died

to stare into the deep blue sky
to feel the moon shine down from on high

I thought of you, as I sat on our swing
when we were younger, carefree, as birds on wing

I wished you were there in the darkness just then, even for a minute, just to see you again,

but all i can do is dream of you as the silvery stars float by.A tear trickles down, I hate when I cry.

I wish I'd been there to kiss you good bye,
to watch you ascend, an angel, to the sky.

Now i lay hear and dream of you, yearning for the day,
you come back from heaven to take me away.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-03-16 04:08 PM

Nice writing...James

Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

2 posted 2003-03-16 05:26 PM

Nice Write Rdz9

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-03-16 05:29 PM

RD - know this feeling all too well - this is lovely:

to watch you ascend, an angel, to the sky.

And ascend they did xxoo

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-03-20 08:07 AM

Touching....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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