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0 posted 2003-03-16 01:23 PM


~*~
You are brown eyes
green eyes are me
Within our eyes
there is much to see

Is seen what has
been in times past
And hopes for the future
when together at last

Emotions are left
sometimes unsaid
But in our eyes
they are always read

The happiness we feel
when together shows clear
Or sadness when departing
not having each other near

Our story these eyes
will always tell
When apart from each other
loneliness shows without fail

Our love for each other
in our eyes is found
My eyes the green ones
and yours the brown
~*~






[This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-16-2003 09:00 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-03-16 01:54 PM




Ethel,

Tender and sweet write. Love it!


Hugs, Pat

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2 posted 2003-03-16 02:02 PM


Thank you, Pat.
I appreciate that.....

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-03-16 02:16 PM


Almost makes me miss being in love!  *W*  
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4 posted 2003-03-16 02:34 PM


Enjoyed...James
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5 posted 2003-03-16 02:52 PM


Very lovely and sweet!
Eric

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Yay!!! (kiss on cheek) I have neither, I have blue eyes, but I find it so magical how we all have different eye colors and when two lovers meet and it is almost as though the colors shine together from the tears of joy! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

















"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2003-03-16 03:20 PM


I agree. Makes me miss being in love too. This was a sweet beautiful write ethel.

:smile;

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8 posted 2003-03-16 09:03 PM


Duncan, it's a wonderful
way to be...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-03-16 09:04 PM


James, I've glad that you
enjoyed it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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10 posted 2003-03-16 09:05 PM


Thank you, Eric. I'm glad
that you liked it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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11 posted 2003-03-16 09:11 PM


Noah, those are such pretty
graphics. I wish I could do
those so bad. Maybe one day I'll
learn..

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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12 posted 2003-03-16 09:13 PM


Albert, thank you very much.
I really appreciate your
sweet words.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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13 posted 2003-03-16 10:06 PM


Nice poem, Ethel.
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14 posted 2003-03-16 10:07 PM


Nice poem, Ethel.
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15 posted 2003-03-16 10:08 PM


Very nice Ethel..love your use of colour here as well.
~Smiles & Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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16 posted 2003-03-16 10:09 PM


How sweet, Ethel! The eyes really are the mirror to the soul.

Liz

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

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17 posted 2003-03-16 10:10 PM


Thank you, Sue. I'm glad
that you liked it.


"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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18 posted 2003-03-16 10:13 PM


Thank you, Nancy. That was
a little bit trouble, changing
the font color that way. It was fun,
though. I wish I could do those
graphics like Noah. He can really
do them, can't he?  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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19 posted 2003-03-16 10:14 PM


Liz, I believe so, too.
Eyes speak without words.
Thanks for reading
and replying.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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20 posted 2003-03-16 11:08 PM


Ethel - so very sweet - I liked this a lot:

Emotions are left
sometimes unsaid
But in our eyes
they are always read

Always in the eyes and in the kiss . . .  xxoo  

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21 posted 2003-03-16 11:19 PM


Sue, you're right.....seen in the
eyes..felt in the kiss.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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22 posted 2003-03-17 03:43 AM


very sweet
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23 posted 2003-03-17 10:10 AM


liked it a lot
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24 posted 2003-03-17 10:31 AM


I enjoyed this , Ethel...very much!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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25 posted 2003-03-17 10:39 AM


A soft wisp of sweet love...

Springtime hugs,
Linda

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