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Mollie963
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0 posted 2003-03-15 07:30 PM


A fading face
Mirrors my reflection
I stare into me
Facing sad eyes
The world never looked into
A hand reaches up
To wipe away glittering fear
Stops
Lets it form, fall and die
That runs.
To run?
I stand still
Let pain cry...

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Saluting with misty eyes
1 posted 2003-03-15 09:45 PM


I stare into me
Facing sad eyes
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Man, have I ever been there, done that, bought the wardrobe that matches.
Very nicely done. Very emotional. Thank you For Sharing.

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

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Beneath the northern stars
2 posted 2003-03-15 11:56 PM


This is very sad.

Elizabeth

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

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3 posted 2003-03-15 11:57 PM


I can almost see it as I read it, Great Work!
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