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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-03-15 05:52 PM



step right up
take a spin,
let a different day
begin and
maybe happiness
will still come in
if you open
the other door...
the one you tried to ignore
but was always there,
waiting for you
to be happy instead of sad

open it

today

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-15-2003 05:52 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-03-15 07:00 PM


Hi Kacy...No maybe about it.Can't think of a better way to brighten the day than by heeding your words.Thanks for a much needed kick in the ass...

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

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2 posted 2003-03-15 07:05 PM


anytime, Ray. Glad if it helped you open a happiness door.
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3 posted 2003-03-15 08:05 PM




(smiles) That certainly is the pragmatic approach, and certainly I find it ridiculous why some people always argue that! LOL! (kiss on cheek) Just do it, hehehe, this is a wonderfully serious poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-03-15 09:40 PM


Alright, where'd ya hide the key??  
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5 posted 2003-03-15 09:47 PM


The Happiness Door... what a concept!!!! How about you makin' me a copy of the key!!!  lol
A very good write. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

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6 posted 2003-03-15 09:48 PM


Hey Kacy
this is some very  good advice. I personally think we all have the choice....because there are usually some happy doors of memories we can open, if nothing else seems to be happy at the moment. Don't you think?  

Hugs,
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-03-15 09:51 PM


Good advice. I would be happy, if I could just find/get a job.
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8 posted 2003-03-15 11:32 PM


Noah, LOL, yes, it is rather pragmatic, isn't it?

Duncan, LOL, I have a spare. HERE, I tossed it to you.

Ringo, OK, here's your copy

Ethel, glad to share the key to a fun idea

Sue, are using your skilled horse riding approach? Keeping the horseshoe turned up? Here's wishing you lots of luck!

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9 posted 2003-03-16 03:04 AM



Midnite - how inspiring!!! But then - you always are xxoo

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10 posted 2003-03-16 10:02 AM


too kind you are littlewing
good morning

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