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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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VA

0 posted 2003-03-15 04:36 PM


Can you hear it
The sound of my heart
Beating within your mind
Do you hear
My tears
Out side of your window pane
Wanting to wash away
All of your pain
I know
It's a bit absurd
But I can feel it
I know
I don't know you
Nor do you know me
But still
I don't like
Sitting around helplessly
Knowing that it shouldn't be this way
For you...
Isn't there atleast
Something I can do?
Isn't there atleast
Something that I can say
To let you know
Honestly and truly
That I'm cheering for you
Behind the scenes
Even though
I don't know you
And that you don't know me...


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (03-15-2003 04:40 PM).]

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Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
1 posted 2003-03-15 10:05 PM


big 's
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
2 posted 2003-03-15 11:42 PM




Very heart touching and compassionate.


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

lost_star
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since 2003-03-15
Posts 114
NY, U.S.A
3 posted 2003-03-15 11:50 PM


Beautifully descriptive, you sound like a really great friend!
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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4 posted 2003-03-16 02:53 AM



C - very nice write - a VERY good friend indeed . . .

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-16-2003 02:55 AM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2003-03-16 07:41 AM


Nice...James
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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6 posted 2003-03-16 10:59 AM


I feel this way about MANY here.

This is a sweetly sincere poem, and I enjoyed much.

Hugs from a former cheerleader.


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