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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-03-15 11:09 AM


Awake
at first tread upon road
your words delivered
my salvation in sentence
i gather from the outside
cradling them where i wish you were
in my bed
i read you warm
over and over until fully absorbed
wishing you closer
i reply.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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1 posted 2003-03-15 11:21 AM


Wow....!!!
This is awesome...truely awesome.
Eric

Flower
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2 posted 2003-03-15 12:21 PM


I like this.
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-03-15 12:21 PM


great write!
littlewing
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4 posted 2003-03-15 12:23 PM



gem - God I love this!  Very intelligent write here - solace in words - the ultimate escape - xxoo

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-03-15 01:14 PM


beautiful gemma, envelopes? people still use those? wonderful adds such a personal touch..
sorry disjointed thoughts loved this

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2003-03-15 01:22 PM


What a lovely way to reply,
simply because it leaves so much unsaid.

Nice gemma~

gemjop
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7 posted 2003-03-15 01:28 PM


awwww thankyou for your beautiful replies, you're all too kind. yep, snail mail as they call it, still ranks high in my priorities, to recieve a letter, hand written from the heart of someone you love, is priceless and indeed timeless.

lots of love to you all....
gemma xxxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Sunshine
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8 posted 2003-03-15 05:46 PM



Very old fashioned sentiments...
I like this very much gemma...
thank you!

    Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

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9 posted 2003-03-15 05:55 PM


Gemma! Where were ya honey? I missed you, I wrote a poem for you and you never saw it. I loved this, I missed your poems.

I look and I listen, does not everyone?

-Diane lee Wilson

gemjop
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10 posted 2003-03-16 07:19 AM


sunshine, thankyou.

Liz! missed you too! a poem for meeeeee? and i missed it, whats it called? oh thats just made my day! xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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