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cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02
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0 posted 2003-03-15 08:18 AM


Good morning,
My beautiful One…
You are the Sun
In my sky,

Warming me as
You rise,

Kissing my eyes
Awake and alive
With your Divine
Light…

The heat of your
Fingers touch
Every part of me
One by one
And all at once.

Thank you for

Your warmth,
Your brilliance,
Your beauty,
Your kiss,
Your touch,
Your love.

And I offer you mine.

Good morning.


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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2003-03-15 08:37 AM


Wow ... this was certainly a pleasant read this morning

thanks for sharing

GG
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2 posted 2003-03-15 10:11 AM


this made me close my eyes, smile, and take in a deep breath, how wonderful! It really is a beautiful day.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Connel
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3 posted 2003-03-15 10:14 AM


Well, This is the only poem I read of yours, But I sure do like it. It has, something undiscribable. Something so beautiful.. I hope I can figure out what it is..

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-03-15 10:53 AM


What a beautiful way to wake up!
Thank you.
Love,
Eric

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-03-15 01:29 PM


cinnamon - so beautiful - please pass some of that my way k?  lol - made me smile
xxoo

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