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Open Poetry #25

Until shadows end

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

0 posted 2003-03-15 07:26 AM

It survived
As long as
A dream does,
Eternally,
Until shadows end
And dawn
Seeps in…

The touch
Of him slipped
Under her silk,
Bled into
Her soul

She did not
Question
Wet of tears
When dawn
Once more
Cried gold.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-03-15 07:50 AM

Nice writing...james

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

2 posted 2003-03-15 08:43 AM

enjoyed this read Elan ... to me, it strikes a sad note

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-03-15 09:18 AM

Elan! So good to see you here again!
Hauntingly sad write this morning though.
Yet oh so beautiful are your words...as always.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-03-15 10:54 AM

Wonderful!
Eric

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2003-03-15 11:01 AM

Elan,

This is so concise and well written. Love it for that alone. Sad? Not necessarily. There are tears of joy, too. And, that is how I choose to see this. Enjoyed greatly. Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-03-15 01:26 PM

Elan - this is amazing - beautiful:

I know this too well:

It survived
As long as
A dream does,
Eternally,
Until shadows end
And dawn
Seeps in…

xxoo

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