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Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

0 posted 2003-03-14 11:58 PM

If you really don't mean to break my heart
then why do you constantly tear it apart

You say all these things without one ounce of care
but I've done nothing wrong, so it's really unfair

I'll say that I'm sorry for the 50th time
but remind me again, what was my crime?

Oh-yeah, the mistake, when I said that I cared
or the time that I promised I'd always be there

If I knew that loving you could be so wrong
I wouldn't have loved you this much for this long

I wish you could know what I'm trying to say
I wish it could stop, but it won't go away

So, I guess I'll keep doing the bad things I do...
you know, sitting and thinking and waiting for you.

So getting in trouble is the chance that I'll take
because no matter what, you're my favorite mistake.

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

1 posted 2003-03-15 01:16 AM

Enjoyed

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-03-15 01:27 AM

Silver

I wish it could stop, but it won't go away

know the feeling well - nice write xxoo

lost_star
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 114
NY, U.S.A

3 posted 2003-03-15 02:55 AM

a mistake so easily made by many, it can feel so right and so wrong at the same time, Great job!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-03-15 07:34 AM

Reminds me of some times when I couldn't stop myself if I tried...it's these times when I feel like I'm setting myself up for failure...James

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2003-03-15 10:07 AM

just today I told someone 'when I said I love you I meant it through the the torture I knew we'd go through'..but then sometimes there's those times when it just isn't right, and you displayed that well.
Enjoyed this

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-03-15 10:17 AM

Nice poem..

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

7 posted 2003-03-15 04:20 PM

Thanks you all....you have made me want to keep writing....

Shayne

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