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Etain
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since 2003-02-22
Posts 92
The moon...

0 posted 2003-03-14 03:20 PM


One after one
my many tears
play the lyre
of melancholy,
dancing ballerina
hidden behind a stage
of ascensive notes.
Dancing ocean through my eyes
I place you a space
to wave your voice.
Lonely tear
of many stories unheard,
storyteller have become
my hazel eyes
under thirsty shadows
waiting to hear
my raving words.
And dancing,
dancing... into stacy
not recognizing
time nor space,
two last tears
beseech once again
to heave alone.
Oh, dancing tear
I let you effortlessly
wing my soul.

What does come after a tear...?

Etain.

© Copyright 2003 Etain - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-03-14 04:30 PM


After the tear comes healing.

This is such a lovely poem.
Thank you,
Eric

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-03-14 04:33 PM


what a beautiful ending!
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