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0 posted 2003-03-14 03:19 PM



She Cares

With gentle hand touch,
Sweet taste of so tender kiss,
My love shows she cares.

believe in what your heart feels...

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1 posted 2003-03-14 03:31 PM


ah..the gentle tenderness of touch..and of it being shown by one that cares for us... described very well here..

a tender touch indeed my friend.. very nice.


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2 posted 2003-03-14 03:47 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may your love always care for you just as you are a caring friend and person that is bound to forever make her feel special! (big hugggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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3 posted 2003-03-14 03:55 PM


scorpio - very nice..yes. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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4 posted 2003-03-14 04:02 PM


very warming
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5 posted 2003-03-14 04:50 PM


With the smallest gesture care and affection can be shown
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6 posted 2003-03-14 07:07 PM


I am positive your love cares deeply for you Scorpio.
For if it's in her touch and her kiss...
it must be in her heart as well.
Very very lovely..gently penned.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

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7 posted 2003-03-14 07:44 PM


Thank you, Ron...your comments mean alot to me..

Noah...thank you...I'm glad you liked this poem..

Thank you for your read, Chris..

Thank you passing shadows for your warm support..

Yes Brad...it's often the small gestures that have the biggest significance..

Nancy...I know it's in her heart too...I feel it each time I hold her...and I see it in the sparkle in her eyes...thank you for your gentle kindness..

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8 posted 2003-03-14 10:28 PM



slender finger strokes
entwines his with hers, just so,
finger talk - best kind

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9 posted 2003-03-14 10:53 PM


Thank you Karilea...your reply is very beautiful..

believe in what your heart feels...

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10 posted 2003-03-15 09:40 PM


Scorpio...So few words spoken so tenderly.
Enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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