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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2003-03-14 11:15 AM

Too Dry to Cry

the morning
seeks the sunrise
as the clouds
reluctantly part

they seem
to be filled with
a sadness
they cannot weep

as if the sun
brings just enough light
just enough cheer
to dry
the release
of just enough tear

so they linger
hover
slowly progress
from gray to white
evolving within the light

©March 14, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-03-14 01:13 PM

This is beautiful, the image, the poem. It makes me ache a bit.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-03-14 01:26 PM

Virginia, beautiful, but sad.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-03-14 04:42 PM

beautifully written!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-03-14 06:39 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Can't cry out here either in Colorado, we're in an intense drought situation and have to cry sand! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2003-03-14 06:45 PM

very nicely done VAS... nice imagery and progression of time..that hints at emotions and perhaps the writers own mind set...

very nice...

I enjoyed

bbent
Senior Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 521
Alaska

6 posted 2003-03-15 06:25 AM

Cool...evolution can indeed bring good things.Enjoyed the share and can relate.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

7 posted 2003-03-15 06:59 AM

I feel this way ... sometimes for months on end
very good read

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

8 posted 2003-03-15 10:03 AM

I enjoyed this.. weird and amazing how nature can be so much like us. But then, this morning I went for a walk in the pouring rain while the sun rised. Beautiful though!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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