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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! 
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My heart is achin My soul is breakin You said you were leaving you're leaving me, im dying! You promised me forever swore leaving me never but now its over how can I recover? Now are ways are parted feeling broken hearted I have to let you go though my heart begs me no! It seems I cant go on living my life alone I know I have to move on but its really hard you know. If only I could hold your heart then maybe we will never part I gave my heart to you Love me because I love you! Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yes, love can be quite awkward, and it doesn't make us warm  wishing you some sunny happy days |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wondefuly expressed. Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts...if there was only a law that if we loved someone they must love us also...but of course there is no law, not even a rule. Our love is free to go where it desires...all we can do is make wise choices and hope that it produces the desired results...James |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Great Poem!! Wonderful work! ~Al |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ahem...Love..it stinks. This message brought to you by the International Association of Disillusioned Broken Hearted and just Generally Pissy Persons |
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