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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Windows Permitting eyes To observe as they will Here words seize, if they ever did, Stanzas wait as bare-breasted mannequins Souls, minds, lie bare in the open Critiques come with a price Gazers grazing Windows |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, they say the eyes our the windows to the soul...us poets know differently. Beautifully expressed dear friend...wonderful piece  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning hip-sis!! Love this early day read! Very well spoken! ~Hugs and I'm off and running~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent Karilea, and so true. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
SUNSHINE!! Ive been waiting forever to hear your poetry once again. And this one is so beautiful!  Good job!  Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Yes... there are windows... very nicely done Sunny one... I enjoyed |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thought-provoking write, Karilea.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mom, your words amaze....and hold such truths...morning hugs today. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sunshine~ A lovely Rictameter. Enjoyed very much...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
amazing, and so true....I love how you write truth....hugssss sweet lady Lauren~ Here I am |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Windows, for looking out and also for looking in, but eyes usually capture the intent of the looker, no matter what window. Hi Karilea...my tongue almost twisted trying to say that one...I hope you understand. Hugs! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
You show a mastery of form and language in this one. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Windows ... to be sure Karilea, and the best part ... Microsoft can't compete excellent writing |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kari, this says a lot with few extra words. I enjoy your talent always. Sandra |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Liked this one, nicely done. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
S from K Here to say O K!! S!! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm so pleased that you posted this lovely rictameter here in Open...  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, Lady, I don't know how I missed this beautiful rictameter. You know that I love it.  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Magnificent....I love it....I love the way you have expressed it....thank you for a treasure of words. |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
The format is so neat! I wonder if it's OK to translate it into Chinese? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
yes,nice write |
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