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Open Poetry #25

hello...I'm gone

Tristan
Junior Member

since 2003-03-12

Posts 29

0 posted 2003-03-14 12:44 PM

(my mom took an idea i had and wrote this)
hello?
can you hear me?
are you there?

we can stay,
just you and me,
we will always be.
until one day you say:

I'm going.
I can't hear you.
I'm not here.

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

1 posted 2003-03-14 01:22 AM

Quite nice.
Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2003-03-14 04:44 AM

Tristan,
nice idea.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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