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Tristan
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since 2003-03-12
Posts 29


0 posted 2003-03-13 09:33 PM


the way you act,
drives me crazy.

the things you say,
wants me to be strong.

the smile on your face,
keeps me sane.

the tears that you cry,
has me crying too.

the happiness you bring,
will stay with me forever.

the love you share,
breaks my heart over and over again.

the way you are,
completes the way I am.

© Copyright 2003 Tristan - All Rights Reserved
Amara
Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158
East of the moon, west of the sun.
1 posted 2003-03-13 09:35 PM


Like pieces of a puzzle fitting together, ne? Lucky you.

Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown]

GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
2 posted 2003-03-13 09:38 PM


this just makes me want to saw awwwwwww ..so sweet in a real way. Enjoyed this

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-03-13 11:30 PM


Tristan - a very special lady you write about...

BC

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-03-14 12:19 PM


Tristan, you told of your love very well...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-03-14 01:17 AM


Tristan - heart of gold there yep -

the way you are,
completes the way I am.

beautiful - such insight xxoo

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