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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-03-13 04:37 PM



We are gods.

In worship to one another.

Our breath is a whispered prayer
across the lips -

A kiss...the temple door.

We each hold the key.

With a touch found holy
we enter into the stillness of
the other.

We are gods.

Seeking communion with ourselves.



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1 posted 2003-03-13 04:38 PM


ourselves...and perhaps each other...

interesting write... I enjoyed

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2 posted 2003-03-13 05:00 PM


Very intriguing way of looking at it Eric.
Much enjoyed the read today.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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3 posted 2003-03-13 05:13 PM


I think you are on to something here . . .
The puzzle of intimacy.

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4 posted 2003-03-13 05:21 PM




(sigh) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as love truly is a church where one will always be blessed by the kyries and light bestowed upon ones heart and soul! (big hugggsssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2003-03-13 06:38 PM




such devotion, how nice

Etain
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6 posted 2003-03-13 07:17 PM


More than words,
it is love.
I love it Ericc.
Praising this ethereal song.
Hugs,
Etain.

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7 posted 2003-03-13 07:29 PM


that was very interesting... :-)

KS

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