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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-03-13 04:35 PM



Adrift

Seeds adrift at sea
Landing on deserted shore
To flourish again


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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-03-13 04:36 PM


coconuts...




chuckling..so often we are like that.. adrift..waiting to find fertile ground in our life to take root..to grow...


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RMW
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2 posted 2003-03-14 01:13 PM


Words filled with hope. Well done. Bob
Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2003-03-14 01:20 PM


Oh, I like that. The image is so strong in so few words. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-03-14 01:22 PM


Yes, you said a lot in
few words. I love these.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

ngoliant
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5 posted 2003-03-14 03:13 PM


I love to read good haiku - so much is said in so few words - distilled spirit.
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