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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-03-13 02:53 PM





Persephone

~*~

first hint of spring mist
is in dew as it is kissed
in the break of light

~*~

whiff of scented breeze
serenades Persephone
trails along her skirt

~*~

shining sun sparkling
dancing fairies on dust motes
lyre strums golden dreams

~*~

she calls upon me
Persephone, sing to me
spring's sweet, soulful song

~*~

gilded lilies white
trail pathways airy and bright
velvet footpath light

~*~

Persephone loved
through persimmon knew the truth
spring births eternal

~*~


dedicated to Marsha 2001
rededicated to Enchantress 2002
dedication renewed to Nightshade 2003

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-13-2003 03:00 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-13 02:57 PM


Yes..I remember...thank you for reposting..
and dedicating once more to another beautiful soul.
~Hugs to you hip-sis~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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2 posted 2003-03-13 02:57 PM


nice dedication list you have there... lol...

nice poem... I enjoyed

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3 posted 2003-03-13 03:00 PM


Karilea...Very lovely feel to this/these!
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4 posted 2003-03-13 04:22 PM


Bootefull!
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5 posted 2003-03-13 05:02 PM


Kari darling heart sister, truly one of your best, you are always a joy to the soul thank you for the gift which I shall always treasure. And definitely your dedication is a gift to all

Truer words have never been penned
As your words are written, but then
No other writer has the gift
The wheat from the chaff to sift
Little nuggets of golden lore
Fall from your pen and evermore
I'll gather these pearls of know
To wash my soul in this pool like so
To learn the secrets that let you fly
Over the world and across the sky
    Don’t leave my soul in ignorance
    Give me that which lets me dance


You sprinkle fantasy with delight
With words woven in fairy sight
A mist of meaning may lie there
A wondering of do or dare
These little poems your souls gift
Written to give us all a lift
A magical web you weave us in
Take us on a voyage within
The sights of your Camelot my friend
Won’t suddenly come to a dead end
For your writings enchanted are
But the sum of you is more by far
         Feed my soul with your fairy touch
         And I’ll tell you of my dreams of such


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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6 posted 2003-03-13 05:23 PM


this is LOVELY !!!

hugsssss


Lauren~

Here I am
Running after dreams ~
I made it through another lonely night
Thinking of you
I know I should be strong
I just can’t say ~goodbye~(LR)

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7 posted 2003-03-13 05:32 PM






(sigh) Phew.......thank God, I can only begin to imagine how worried Demeter can be and how much she has to suffer every autumn and winter without her daughter, now she is back to bring the blessings and the flowers up again! (big hugggsssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, God Bless You, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2003-03-13 07:23 PM


Sweet, so sweet Sunshine,
as the coming spring.
Warm greetings,
Etain.

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just out of reach
9 posted 2003-03-13 07:27 PM


Oh my Karilea - how beautiful!! Thankyou for this dedication. I am truly flattered. You are one special lady. Oh, and thankyou for signing my guestbook too!! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by Nightshade (03-13-2003 07:28 PM).]

vandana
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10 posted 2003-03-13 07:57 PM


enjoyed
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11 posted 2003-03-21 11:17 AM


You give me pause to wonder
(I hope I do not blunder)
At how our minds may travel
and yet may not unravel.
Expressions that we post here
do find us friends held most dear.
You form the bricks and yes, the mortar
So Karilea, love you we "oughter"

KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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12 posted 2003-03-21 11:30 AM


Sun - this one is your best I have seen - just lovely - xxoo
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13 posted 2003-03-21 11:48 AM


Between your lovely poem so full of enchantment, beauty, and love--and Marsha's gracious and lovely tribute poem to you--I'm all misty-eyed! I got treated to two fine poems with one click of my trusty mouse!

I echo Marsha's eloquent words of appreciation for you, Dear One! --you add sunshine to all our lives...

Peace & Love,
Linda

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14 posted 2003-09-21 08:34 PM


                                    

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15 posted 2008-01-29 08:44 PM


lovely sunshine

ARCTIC WIND

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