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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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At times the feelings become to strong and panic mode begins to stir again emotions over rule where thought belongs somedays it feels as though I'll never win. I think of this, and dwell on that no calm thoughts can I seem to find just a constant ratatat tat I fear I might lose my mind. A broken spirit holds no words when suffering love and pain of life even the trill of cooing birds doesn't help to ease this strife. Oh, please let these shattered moments cease give me just a few moments of peace. I must have had my momma's will and Gods Amazing Grace... I'm a survivor.... (Reba) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-13-2003 01:02 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
i do hope the peace you seek you find... it does at times seem all we can want..a few moments peace from ourselves and our doubts. well written... and nicely expressed. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Absolutely. And sometimes you'll say, I'm not going to think about that! And two minutes later, what are you thinking about? Yeah. Oh well, I hope you get some peace. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna--Sometimes coming out of a place of turmoil, peace just is, comfortable and waiting. You'll find it!  [This message has been edited by Martie (03-13-2003 01:10 PM).] |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Never doubt inner peace, seek and ye shall find....easier said then done, but time does have a way of healing....heart hugs luv you  Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks all...  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Reba knows... I know... you know... but it does help to write it down, doesn't it...? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Donna, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright as we are all here to send angel hugs your way if you need a shoulder! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send bluebird of happiness hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Keep writing it out sweetie.. the peace will come...give it time. ~Heart hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know all about those panic modes, Donna. I hope you find your peace, soon. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Donna~ Touching. I hope everything gets better and your Shattered Moments turn into Treasured Moments...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all so very much for the gracious replies and for your support. Ya'll are wonderful! I must have had my momma's will |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, you are such a sweet and loving person, and I hate for you to be going through all this. I do believe that you will come out of it stronger...soon. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ethel, thank you so much for that vote of confidence. U R a sweetie!! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Donna, You've captured perfectly that brokenness I've certainly felt a long time ago. Thank you for putting into beautiful words and clarity what many struggle through and can't identify so eloquently; a relief for them to know someone else feels this way. Expressing it as well as you have is a gift you give to all. May you receive back the measure of it's value. And, you will. Hugs and love, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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