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Soft Tenacity & Unabridged Virtue

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Effigy
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0 posted 03-13-2003 10:58 AM       View Profile for Effigy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Effigy


          Red night eyes linger,
               tired.

Disenchanment
     draws down devil's
          designs, delusions,
               decadence...
                         (defraud, defile, deprive, destroy, devour)
               ...divulging
          dawn's deceitful
     destiny



[This message has been edited by Effigy (03-13-2003 11:03 AM).]

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1 posted 03-13-2003 11:33 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

nice use of alliteration.... and a nice piece. I enjoyed.

Effigy
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thanks that was nice... of you. i'm thrilled

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Honestly Wes, I usually don't enjoy your pieces that are heavily dependant on alliteration, but this one hooked me. I really enjoyed it.

Good job!

I believe the most important component of a poem is rhythm. Rhythm is the heartbeat of a poem. It is what makes poetry poetry.

 
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