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Would I ,Would You , Would We
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Would I ,Would You , Would We |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Would I ,Would You , Would We Would I run to open arms If ever we met one day Would words flow freely In knowing what to say Would we gaze into eyes Linger on our first kiss Would our heart's race Do you ever think of this Would we be lighthearted Bask in sunset serenity Sharing tender moments By caressing sensually Would there be soft music Sensual swaying of hips Would warm embraces Bring smiles to our lips Would we glance the sky View silver moon above Would the feelings be felt Of the depths of ones love Would you serenade me I ponder time after time Would it be this romantic Are your thoughts like mine Hope©2003 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is what I think about all the time. What would it be like when me and Liam meet for the first time? I loved this poem. It totally related to me. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thanks Julie , happy that you can relate and I appreciate your reply and understanding Hope |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Hope, Good write. Can relate. And you stirred up my own thoughts on the matter. There would be nothing to say, though, me thinks. Just hold him at arm's length, look deeply into his eyes, for a loooooong time and drink him in to relieve this undying thirst. Grinning here....enjoyed this greatly! Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I love all the thoughts and desires in this one...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hello Hope...this is very lovely... I'm sure you know the answer to these questions already. Such a beautiful write poetess Hope. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Oh, I have no doubt! And you have, no doubt, imagined the scene in many versions. Enjoyed this. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
is the reality ever the equal of the fantasy, take it from one who went through it.......... yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
LOL@Inkgoddess.... been there....had it....go for it! KS |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
HopeS - Just to have one of these thoughts would be awesome, all of them exhilerating. And these poem is both of these things... BC |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
meeting a family of friends online soon, with one of them being the one who's caught the fondness of my heart... makes this especially relevant to me. I guess I'll find out what happens only a month to go!Great write. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) It can, it could, it should, and....IT WILL!!! (kiss on cheek) In love anything is possible and this is bound to come true for you forever, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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