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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-03-12 10:12 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * * *

My heart grows ever fonder
My love is warmer than the sun
I've been saving all my love
For I'm certain you're the one

The star in my constellation
You're the one who I adore
These feelings I have for you
Simply cannot be ignored

With you I am in heaven
I feel so alive and free
Your love moves throughout my being
Into the heart and soul of me

My love can only be measured
By the highest mountain peak
My life has found new meaning
Each and every day of the week

I have found my perfect love
Such a love I've never known
You became a welcome resident
When you called my heart your home

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-03-12 10:32 PM


This is so romantic. *sighs* I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-03-12 10:32 PM


Sue..so beautiful it's breathtaking!
~Hugs & a vote~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-03-12 11:35 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is lovely, sweet friend, yay, and may love always be the happy bluebird that sings in your heart with promises of eternity and sing sweet symphonies! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-03-12 11:44 PM


You do have a gift for romance -- lucky the fellow this us written for!

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5 posted 2003-03-13 11:41 AM


Ohhhh, right out of Harlequin romance this is Sue! A vote for you on this one.

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-03-13 11:50 AM


Suetang
Who could ask for more, enjoyed.

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7 posted 2003-03-14 11:16 AM


How beautiful and romantic! *S* I loved it from the moment I read the title. *S*
passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-03-14 11:23 AM


how beautiful!
regards2you
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9 posted 2003-03-14 11:31 AM




Sue,

I like the entire poem, but the last two lines are just precious.


Enjoyed, Pat

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        "Desiderata"

garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-03-14 01:37 PM


So very beautiful, Sue...

Hugs,
Ethel

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11 posted 2003-03-14 08:22 PM


Oh Sue, this is so beautiful.
Paul Wilson
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12 posted 2003-03-14 08:36 PM


Sue~ Your words of love warm my heart. Too love and be loved how wonderful. Best wishes too you and yours...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2003-03-15 07:14 AM


Fantastic Sue...James
El_Campeador
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14 posted 2003-03-17 09:15 AM


Beautiful Poem...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Chanson
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15 posted 2003-03-17 09:55 AM


What can I say but very "love"ly! *s
Earth Angel
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16 posted 2003-03-19 09:25 AM


Sue, you ooze the sweetness of romance with your beautiful words of love...

Peace & Light,
EA

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17 posted 2003-03-19 06:31 PM


ENJOYED THE READ
icequeen
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18 posted 2003-03-19 08:07 PM


I agree with Pat... love the last two lines!

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

littlewing
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19 posted 2003-03-24 01:31 AM


Sue - this is just lovely - as always - makes me believe that IT is just out there for everyone  xxoo
Justbleu
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20 posted 2003-04-17 08:59 AM


This is wonderful....Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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