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Maverick Wolf
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0 posted 2003-03-12 12:12 PM


The dew gathers on the cold glass
Gaining water
Blocking the outside

The dew runs down the window
Pooling at its base
Running, nowhere at all

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1 posted 2003-03-12 01:43 PM


MaverickWolf~
The title drew me in ... enjoyed this read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2003-03-12 04:06 PM


nicely done
Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2003-03-12 05:09 PM


Odd how I can get an emotion out of such a short descriptive poem. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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