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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Do they? Of course they don't Why else Would they scream and shout Pretending she can't hear them That I can't hear them Will they? Obviously not They'll never pull her closer Unshed her tears Help vanquish the demons In her head Do they? Will they? Ever want to understand That sometimes she just Feels like she'll never fit in Do they? Will they? Ever comprehend That she is just What they made her out to be A figment of their Insecurities Little Miss Drama Queen Swallowing the pills They force down her throat Drowning in alcholol And one night stands Do they? Will they? Ever love me? If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (03-12-2003 08:20 PM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I like the way you did this one. Innovative, well-written, and it makes me sad, too. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
C - now you got me cryin here - this one goes deep - xxoo |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
 Oh, this is very Emotional poem. It has much feeling. And Im sorry  . But, extremly nice poem!  Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Tristan Junior Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 29 |
This is extremely emotional,well-written poem. I really like it. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
christ this hurts both from how it's eating you and from personal experience.. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damn good, Kristen One of your best! Happy to hear from ya. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
wow...brutally open and honest awesome |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
bittersweet write...I enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Will they? Ever love me?-- hey you? will YOU?  |
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Tristan Junior Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 29 |
really well written and emotional. very very nice |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
real good, full of babymama primadonna drama |
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