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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-03-12 11:29 AM




Blasphemy runs like
blood over a plastic crucifix
onto Swaggert's secret stash
of Hustlers
"I have sinned:
yet belittle the sheep
for following the shepard
alterboys in father Brian's
"private" chambers
paying penance
for lost innocense
as the staue of Jesus
drips another tear of
blood
before crashing on the floor
below
unheard beneath the droning noise
of mindless ritual
except the old mexican Janitor
who cleans up the pieces
and puts up a new one in its
place
walking away cursing in spanish
about cheap Japanese
merchandise.

© Copyright 2003 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-12 02:29 PM


Yep, more plastic iconology than anyone can possibly revere.
My neighbor in California had a plastic Mary, plastic Jesus, and a furry dog figurine whose head wobbled up and down...
all mounted to his dashboard.
I never did figure out which one he favored the most, as they all seemd to have equal an foothold in his old Chevy.

but then I know there is much more to this post than the icons indicate.  

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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-03-12 02:32 PM


Brad,
Something to think about, enjoyed.

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3 posted 2003-03-12 02:54 PM


You will never know how much I loved this. It is so full of truths!

Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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4 posted 2003-03-12 03:36 PM


this is why i follow the Tao
Brad Majors
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5 posted 2003-03-12 03:56 PM


Thank you for reading!
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6 posted 2003-03-13 02:34 AM


was watching some clergy from several denomanations having a go at each other on Larry King the other day and it brought to mind those little flesh colored Christs that glow in the dark and just what is really considered sacred.enjoyed your write.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

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7 posted 2003-03-13 11:32 AM


Loved this more than you know. Funny how a religion who's WORD is against the worshipping of idols has and sells myriads of them.
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8 posted 2003-03-14 12:33 PM


"I have sinned:
yet belittle the sheep
for following the shepard
alterboys in father Brian's
"private" chambers
paying penance
for lost innocense"

The meaning behind the above words were certainly not lost on me.  The irony, the truth, the brilliance.  Left me shaking my head in absolute astonishment.  So much more than well done!!

Susan

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9 posted 2003-03-14 01:34 PM


Brad, I saw beyond your words of the
plastic figurines in this one.

I think sometimes when people condemn
others, they forget that they themselvs
have had to beg forgiveness...if not for
the identical thing they are condemning,
something equally wrong and immoral.
People should always think from where they
have come, and to have a forgiving spirit
for others.

Hugs,
Ethel

Brad Majors
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10 posted 2003-03-14 03:09 PM


thank you
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11 posted 2003-03-14 06:47 PM


certainly a sadness in much of what we see, but to think that, too, when He was in the flesh, He was rejected by so many as if He were something ordinary

"What good can come from Nazereth?" they asked.

It does no good to love the image if one does not know the Shepherd and the image is not the Shepherd, but perhaps a reminder and a statement that can only be backed up by one's life.

Really enjoyed the read, quite provocative, you see.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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12 posted 2003-03-15 12:23 PM


Brad - this was amazing - perfectly executed

alterboys in father Brian's
"private" chambers
paying penance
for lost innocense
as the staue of Jesus
drips another tear of
blood

xxoo

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