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She Wondered If She Belonged Amongst the Giants
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She Wondered If She Belonged Amongst the Giants |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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depth of heart she tries to describe her thoughts Sometimes writing of pain embedded deep within Writing so that maybe some healing will come for the scars of heart aches Most times she writes of the happiness she feels with the love of her life of the stars and moon the velvet skies moonlit nights whispers of love from the breeze She tells of the true love they have found wanting others to share in the feelings of her joy One day she happened upon a place where she could share her thoughts feelings of her heart She knew when she first came even before joining this group of writers that her writing was so little compared to the talents she found on these pages so little, except that it did come from her heart She then decided to write her heart on these pages and to her amazement these talents these giants among writers accepted her and called these writes from her heart poetry These caring people have supported her encouraged her have given to her their love and friendship from their hearts most have anyway Still some days she wonders if these writings from her heart really do belong here amongst all these giants all these real writers of real poetry |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
They do...very much so. Beautiful poem! Eric |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
What comes from the heart so beautifully as your poems MUST be shared, and this one is totaly...you!  Keep writing, you're doing a great job. Deb  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ethel - and here I thought I was the only one wondering if I should continue to post my little offerings here!! You, my friend, have a lovely way of expressing yourself. Please keep giving us pieces from your heart. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Lovely... and of course your poetry is real. Poetry unfelt by the writer will almost always leave the reader with no real feeling. You feel your poetry before it hits the page, I know... and I had nice goosebumps and a smile when reading this piece, so you see... there you are, a real poet, where real poets post. You belong and are one with the giants.  the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ethel, I surely can relate to how you feel regarding posting attempts of capturing our feelings and wondering if they belong here, among those who write so perfectly. But, it is what others have said to you already. Your poetry is heartfelt and really has changed quite a bit. You've ventured out and tried different styles and never failed at any of them. Most, you capture love with such beauty and honesty and wholesomeness it is a delight to read. You do have talent, and that perfection seen in the giants didn't happen overnight. I think it is about practice as with anything we attempt. I can see a lot of growth in your poetry. It is all enjoyable. Glad to see you posting. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ethel you write from the heart, have always been kind,gentle and supportive that makes you a giant. IT's that support that keeps many of people writing. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Believe me when I say this, in poetry there is no such thing as talent, for like my signature from Shakira says, "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story!". Everyone has a story to tell and all words that are honest is truly meaningful! (kiss on cheek) Everyone belongs along one another, and there is no such thing as proportion among us poets as we all have a song to sing! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are loved by us all and are so very special, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
nothing ever sounds better then a poem that comes straight from the heart! Good work. Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Ethel, I understand how you feel, as I too feel far inferior to many of the poetic giants of this site. But let me assure you, you belong; you really belong. And I am glad you're here. Hugs and luvs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, thank you very much. I really appreciate your kind replies.  Deb, thank you for your very sweet words. I appreciate thm so much. Chris, you do very beautiful work. I signed your guestbook at your site today. It's absolutely beautiful. You and your friend did a very good job. Thank you for your sweet reply. icequeen, thank you so much for reading and replying with such a nice reply. Heart Hugs to you all Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, somehow I knew that you would understand. Thank you so much for your sweet reply. I really appreciate it very much. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, thank you for your sweet reply. That was very nice of you to say. I really appreciate it. Noah, there you are, saying exactly the right thing again. You are very sweet and I appreciate it. Connell, thank you so much for your sweet reply. You are so nice. Martie, you are one of the best writers on here. Don't ever feel this way, friend. I enjoy every poem of yours I read. Your pictures you put with them are so special, too. Thank you. Heart Hugs to you all, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-12-2003 08:32 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ethel - goodness was just feeling the very same way the other day and yes - we all belong here - to inspire each other - very nice - made me smile xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
littlewing, I'm glad I made you smile. It's good to know that others feel this way, too, though. "Love makes the world go around" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is just what I needed to read today... when my own inferiority complex is telling me to slink away and quit embarrassing myself. *S* But as even a cat can look at a king, I can admire and appreciate even if I never rise above midget stature. *S* As for you, dear lady... your big beautiful heart soars to lofty heights... you definitely belong. *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
My dear Suthern Lady, you are definitely one of the giants with enormous talent and abilities. I love to read your poetry. You have the ability to write in a way I wish I could, and also the heart to make your readers feel what you are feeling. Thank you so much for your sweet comments. I really do appreciate you, friend. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You have no idea how i look up to you, and your strength in love. you inspire me to love even more. your poetry is distinctive, and unmistakable, its Ethel Mae poetry! A giant in itself. like you say, truly from the heart, there is no such possible greatness than that. here is where you belong.  much love to you friend xxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
You belong here as much as anyone....maybe even more than some. Keep writing. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes. And I say it that simply because if I add the modifier I'm thinking of, you won't believe I'm being sincere. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
all these real writers of real poetry **** You know PiP is such a wonderful place. We don't have too many 'egos' around here. Everyone is encouraged to post what they write, whether it's their first poem or their millionth. Quality may vary but the feelings are always there - if it comes from your heart, it's poetry. When I read a poem by Balladeer or Cpat Hair or serenity (or Michael Anderson where are you), I wonder why anyone would read my lousy stuff!! There are no poetic giants here..some poets are just standing on a higher hill than the rest of us!  |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
a home wouldn't be home without every member of the family safely tucked inside.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel, now you know what my response to your undervaluating yourself as a poet would be! Love you! Love your poetry! Dear giantess among the giants! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
supported her encouraged her have given to her their love and friendship from their hearts most have anyway Ethel...how many times I feel just like you...this is such a wonderful community, and we can find so many great writers within...all of them, welcoming each, and every one of us... Thank you for writing this!  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethel...Your sincere feelings in both poetry and replies are much appreciated and enjoyed. I'm very glad you're here! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, my sweet friend, you don't know how much I Appreciate you. You are always here with a quick reply and loving words. Thank you Richard, what a sweet thing for you to say. I thank you, and I really appreciate you and your poetry. Ed, I thank you for understanding me. I just feel so inadequate in my writing, sometimes. I see the work of all you talented poets on here and wish I could write more like that. Thank you, again. Sharon, you don't know how much I appreciate those words from you. Your poems were some of the Poetry I started looking for on the main site a while before I even joined PIP. All I knew was Poet deVine, then. I love your poetry and I love this site. Thank you.. Heart Hugs to each of you, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kristie Sue, you are right. I just feel so little in my abilities to write that I forget that I'm among my family of friends here. Linda, yeah, I can just imagine what you might say...LOL You know how much I appreciate you, my friend. Thank you very much, sweet Earthey Angel, for your encouragement. Karilea, thank you for your encouraging words, now and so many times before, too. Thank you for keeping this, too. You know how much I love your poetry, Lady. Marti, thank you very much. You are one of the sweetest and most sincere people that I know. Your personality shines through your poetry and your replies. Heart Hugs to you all, Ethel |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - the thoughts you write about you write about well... Stirring write... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Bill. I really appreciate you and your poetry and replies.. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
LOL.... sorry... but you see... the things you say in this you worry about or think about.. I'm guessing everyone here has had cross their mind.. we all wonder if we should be on the same pages with the ones we see as being real or good sometimes..or at least I know i do... keep writing them..we'll keep reading... so sorry.. the irony of it however is just so amusing to me this morning..  [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (03-14-2003 09:23 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Capt. Ron, I've noticed that you are always putting your poetry down in your responses to others replies. All this time, I thought you were just being humble. Do you honestly sometimes think your work isn't as good as others? Now, that idea is funny to me, because in my eyes, your writing is right up there with the greatest poets of all time!!!!!! Sometimes, I don't even feel like I'll give a sufficient reply to your poetry. Hugs, Ethel |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Ethel, i well remember the poem you wrote about how your country men should support your troops unreservedly, no matter what happens because you felt that they were unfairly shortcharged during the Vietnam War.... what poetry does is to present an unique point of view...i don't spend much time at this site these days so i don't really get to read your love poetry all that much but your grounded perspective hit me hard during your troops poem and made it memorable... sometimes, that's all to it about writing, isn't it? about it being your point of view..and we keep on trying, hoping to enrich our world so... keep writing! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kaile, you may never know just how much I appreciate your kind words. Yes, you're right about what poetry is, come to think of it.....just as most forms of writing are the individual authors point of view. Thank you for reminding me. As for the poem about the troops, I really feel that way, even though I hope and pray that we will always have peace and not war. I love everybody and it hurts me to think of anyone getting hurt in any way. Thank you again, for reading and replying to my poem. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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