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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-03-11 03:50 PM


Liam's computer is messed up for awhile. Something in it was burning. So now I have to live without him for awhile.
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You turn it on
And it makes
Funky noises
And the smell
Of burning
Enters your nose

The screen goes black
The computer shuts off
On its own
Never to be started
Again

Darn Computer

Cold hands means a warm heart

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BlueEyes
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1 posted 2003-03-11 04:11 PM


LOL.... oh, I'm so sorry Julie...

Hopefully it'll be up and running soon!

Then again, there's the good old standby - the phone - but that gets expensive after a while...

Here's to a speedy recover for Liam's computer!

Effigy
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2 posted 2003-03-11 04:36 PM


You gotta hate it. lol
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-03-11 04:43 PM


Oh Julie, I hope it gets fixed soon. I know how expensive the phone bills get, because Gary doesn't have a computer. But, we do write a whole lot of letters. Good luck.  

Heart Hugs,
Ethel  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-11-2003 04:43 PM).]

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24
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4 posted 2003-03-11 04:53 PM


When the black smoke curls up 'round the mouse
And you've fumed from room to room in the house
When your disk drives sound like shifting sans clutch
Perhaps you've been surfing a little too much?
Sorry to hear of your problems..hope for quick recovery....Ken  

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Marshalzu
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5 posted 2003-03-11 05:00 PM


Technology can be both a blessing and a burden, great poem, thanks for sharing it with us

Andrew

ThunderMage
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6 posted 2003-03-11 09:10 PM


Hope isn't lost though Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Connel
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7 posted 2003-03-11 09:51 PM


You know, I wrote a poem like that once.. . That was funny.. Thanks for sharing!

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

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