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Open Poetry #25
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dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26
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0 posted 2003-03-11 02:35 AM


Staring at the white shadow
As if it were so real
The gaze made of simper
Unable to move or feel
As I listened to its mournful cry
Feeling its pain and regret
As if were familiar
I suddenly came to realize
I was merely, searching my heart.
© Copyright 2003 Dennis Hicks - All Rights Reserved
DarkSide_Blues
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since 2003-03-08
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1 posted 2003-03-11 12:59 PM

Very soulful. o_O I like how the title fits in.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-03-11 03:13 PM

"the gaze made of simper"

nice touch...love the ending
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