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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-03-11 05:41 AM



Awaiting Another Apology

His apologies were clues
I had been to blind to see  
Until it hurts when I realise
He had never needed me

Apologies are sent often
Only to soothe and pacify
By covering over motives
He hopes sorry will satisfy

Something as gone amiss
Towards what used to be
I'm often left waiting weeks
Silence clouded in mystery

Questions go unanswered
His reason I still fail to see
Still I shall remain devoted
Awaiting another apology

HopeĀ©2003

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regards2you
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1 posted 2003-03-11 07:57 PM




Hope,

I have read this several times and don't quite understand the situation.

But, what you wrote well and came across is a painful relationship with answered questions, and yet, a strong enough love to wait it out for awhile longer. Again, I don't know the situation, but I do believe our loved ones do go through stages of their own growth and changing and loyalty is an admirable trait as we wait.

And that is a very difficult thing to do.

Hugs, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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2 posted 2003-03-11 08:01 PM


Hope - this is quite a sad write. But, I must say, very well written. I do pray all is well with you. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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