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DarkSide_Blues
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0 posted 2003-03-10 10:56 PM



Hello all! This is the poem I chose my name for. Lol. I'll leave you wondering as too why, in the spirit of the poem. And before anyone asks, yes, it -was- meant to be esoteric in this manner.


DarkSide Blues.

One day, I walked, upon a man, who's eyes cast gentle hues,
Blue and grey, a humble sway, he spoke of much to lose,
In these orbs, of life, were pain, and I knew how much he'd lost,
But at night, while we all sleep, he fights, to pay the cost,
No job was ever easy, when you're living such a life,
No price was ever low, and most prices bare a knife,
So there he is, a simple man, with many paths to choose,
A simple man, with gentle eyes, who has the DarkSide Blues.

© Copyright 2003 Stephen White - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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1 posted 2003-03-10 11:19 PM


I think that's really good....like the username and the term. Well done!

Elizabeth

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

sea_of_okc
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2 posted 2003-03-10 11:21 PM


An autobiographical poem? Hmmmm I like...
littlewing
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3 posted 2003-03-11 02:52 AM


Nice job there DarkSide - keep em coming xxoo
DarkSide_Blues
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4 posted 2003-03-11 12:50 PM


Thank ya'll. ^_^
Connel
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5 posted 2003-03-14 07:49 PM


Okay, stephen.. I had to go back a way to find this.. But, Im glad I did. Good job my Magical Donkey Friend!

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

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