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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-03-10 07:51 PM


In a paradise
amongst swelling dunes
lapped by waters blue
beneath summer moon's

... I hear you calling

Waves and waves of want
further than eye can sea
timeless sands of needs
waiting to be free

... I feel you nearing

These storms of passion
oh, such sweet release
the child of emotions
until the storms cease

... I live for your shores

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-03-10 07:58 PM


Wonderful! Such a passionate rhythm!
Margherita

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
2 posted 2003-03-10 08:00 PM


“just short of Paradise--
storms of passion,
timeless sands,
waiting to be free,
until the storms cease
at  your shores”
Magic…..peaceful thoughts….



Me~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-03-10 08:21 PM


Craig~ This is my color blue!
Such timeless emotions and so beautiful you~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-10-2003 09:08 PM).]

noah j
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since 2003-03-05
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on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair
4 posted 2003-03-10 08:36 PM


love the rhythm of the poem. it flows gently along.
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2003-03-10 10:37 PM


lifes a beach, oh yea,,,,,,,,,,,
wanna play under the boardwalk?

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-10-2003 10:42 PM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2003-03-11 01:34 AM


I'm captured...
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
7 posted 2003-03-11 02:34 AM


C - ride the wave - is beautiful - lovely writing xxoo
BloomingRose
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Florida
8 posted 2003-03-11 01:24 PM


This is nicely written. I can read the passion in it well.

Deb

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2003-03-12 03:41 AM


Nice writing...James
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