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You That I See
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You That I See |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“YOU THAT I SEE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ When the misty fog rises from the lake, and the sun is tender embracing a lily, I see only the beauty in your being, and how it affects me seductively… When the morning is alive yet tranquil, and the wind blows calmly in silence, I see only the serenity that's within, and how we flow together in confluence… When the sky is bright in blue of sapphires, and diamonds sparkle upon your silken hair, I see only the enchantment of eyes tender, and know I would come to you anywhere… When the darkness kisses a moonlit night, and shadows embrace upon loving breasts, I see only the tenderness you bestow, and how softness is willing to be caressed… ~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful as always Bill... I very much enjoy your romantic heart. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
When the sky is bright in blue of sapphires, and diamonds sparkle upon your silken hair, I see only the enchantment of eyes tender, and know I would come to you anywhere… Beautiful Bill !! Love this. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful Bill! Tenderness and passion going hand in hand. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done Bill.. as usual. I enjoyed |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a fine write. Bet you don't have a musical instrument in mind. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bill, This is especially lovely. One of your best. Enjoyed greatly, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This makes my heart feel. Your poem just about swept me off my feet BC~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So beautiful, Bill...  Hugs, Ethel |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you do know how to write the heart....and with each time, its more magical.....  Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Bill, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your romantic poetry does, love is never ordinary and it takes eternity to see all the whereabouts, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
One of your most beautiful, Bill! |
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DarkSide_Blues Junior Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 41Fl, Usa. |
Very touching. The type of writing that moves you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah Bill...what a scene! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Your romantic side is showing, and as always it's a delight to read. Deb |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC, sighing ever so softly .... lovely. Huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Writing about another persons beauty I think is quit hard, I think anyway. And this, is beond lovely. I just love it.. Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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