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Connel
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0 posted 2003-03-10 06:10 PM


I feel lost, not knowing where to go.
Walking in circles, thinking I know.
Thinking hard and wondering why.
Why is my life so differ? Sometimes I wanna cry.

I wish I were back, as a young boy.
Always running around, so full of joy.
I love my parents, and I don't mean what I say.
Just that I feel lost, and don't know my way

I can't see my reasons, for being mad.
I miss the fun times, we all had.
Them times have changed, and so have I.
I can't promise to be happy, but I shall try.

I think I found my way, and I'm not lost.
And I will change, no matter what the cost.

--- ( Old end ) ---
Ill try to change, and be a fun guy.
Someone happy, that's no lie.


Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

[This message has been edited by Connel (03-10-2003 07:53 PM).]

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Ringo
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1 posted 2003-03-10 06:13 PM


Connel,
I COMPLETELY understand your thoughts, and can appreciate them. It takes mucho work, however the happiness is there if you search hard enough. I wish you great success in your search.

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-03-10 06:19 PM


The way your emotions flow is great. Great write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2003-03-10 06:34 PM


In the moment you begin to question, the answers will come.
Ah, the longing for the times when we were happy with little things ..... just cultivate the child within, it will show the way.
Enjoyed your poem!
Margherita

Connel
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4 posted 2003-03-10 07:35 PM


Ringo - Thanks, It has actually been getting better within the last few days.

The Loner - Yeah, The way people can allow their emotions to flow out into their words. A diffacult thing to do. But, after time its easy. ( Wish I could get it down. lol )

Margherita - Well, I dont think that the minute you question answers pop up. I think itle take SOME time before I find out how I can become happy, And I alreasy found one. And thats being here with all my friends at PIP.

--------


Thanks guys, for all the nice replies!

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

Connel
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5 posted 2003-03-10 07:53 PM


I just updated it now.. I changed the end.. The end was kinda weak. So made it better!

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

DarkSide_Blues
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6 posted 2003-03-10 10:59 PM


Sup, My magical monkey friend! Another good one, with strong feelings behind it. I know everyone feels this way at one point in there life. Time is the largest *radio edit* bandaid in the world though. ^_^ \V/ Good job. Ja ne.
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7 posted 2003-03-10 11:28 PM


I like the new ending the best. Sometimes we all need to look for direction and find our way. Good work, Connel, I'm glad to see that you found yours.

Elizabeth

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

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8 posted 2003-03-11 12:04 PM


It's a journey we all take with questions we all ask and a reminder to seize the day.
passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-03-11 01:40 AM


I can relate well...you are not alone...
BloomingRose
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10 posted 2003-03-11 01:26 PM


I think we all feel that way sometimes.
Nice job!

Deb

Connel
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11 posted 2003-03-11 02:35 PM


Thanks guys.. Oh, and stephen, quit calling me your magical monkey friend . its just a bit disterbing.

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

SmartChick
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12 posted 2003-03-11 10:10 PM


I know how you feel.
Bill Charles
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13 posted 2003-03-11 10:22 PM


Connel - Your thoughts I've known, best to you...

BC

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14 posted 2003-03-11 10:24 PM


I Love it, i can relate to being lost...
nice job

Shayne

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