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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-03-10 04:30 PM



In the centre of blind darkness
i draw serene echos of mind
from melody sweet and simple
holding universal message
breathing in the naked flow
surrounded by it's confidence
rocked gently by note of delicate force
caving in with overflow
warm surfacing feeling beneath my skin
charmed by sincerity of perfection
written with gift and wit
i smile at the thought
of how you'd be protesting now.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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1 posted 2003-03-10 05:15 PM


You are so clever with words!
Such style!
Eric

Connel
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2 posted 2003-03-10 05:58 PM


Such a talented poet, with such beautiful poetry!

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

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3 posted 2003-03-10 06:09 PM


Such Heartfelt words. enjoyed.
Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-03-10 09:39 PM


Sigh he would be wouldn't he. We lost a powerful voice and an immense talent in him..sigh imagine

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-10-2003 09:39 PM).]

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-03-10 09:57 PM


Gemma...YES, I agree!!
littlewing
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6 posted 2003-03-11 02:58 AM


gem - nice job - as always - truly . . . sittin here wishin it were . . . xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-11-2003 02:59 AM).]

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