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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-03-10 03:20 PM



She says she is plain
an everyday ordinary girl
nothing much to look at unless you see the reflection of her soul

I beg to differ from the flesh to deep within
she has beauty untold
Venus features satin skin and a heart of gold

She is the day and the night the sun and starlight
the best of both worlds to me and all who she knows
Her energy entwines all who are near

She is not an ordinary girl but an Extraordinary
beyond a persons dreams only modest it seems



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1 posted 2003-03-10 03:58 PM


some people don't see how special they truly are... and it is noce when someone does see that in them.. I am sure she will enjoy this..

nicely done...

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2 posted 2003-03-10 04:04 PM


Nobody is ever like they appear. good piece
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-03-10 04:10 PM


Enjoyed...James
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4 posted 2003-03-10 06:10 PM


This is so romantic. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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5 posted 2003-03-10 06:18 PM


Great poem showing once again that beauty is where you find it.
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6 posted 2003-03-10 08:36 PM




(smiles) Oh Thomas, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yes, true beauty is on the inside and I think many fail to recognize that! (big hugggsssssss) You are beautiful, everyone is beautiful, and there is no shame in admitting it, God Bless You, you have my beauty vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Thomas, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2003-03-11 12:31 PM


Great tribute to what is real.
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8 posted 2003-03-11 12:41 PM


It doesn't get any better than this!

Loved the polish and simple elegance~

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9 posted 2003-03-11 01:37 AM


wow...nice description
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10 posted 2003-03-11 02:44 AM


This seems to me to be something every girl would love to hear about themselves.. how special. This is so beautiful.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Thomas119gold
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11 posted 2003-03-11 01:50 PM


You each understood my meaning and my feelings in them

thank you
Thomas

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12 posted 2003-03-12 07:05 PM


Beauty is in the eye of the beholder..it's nice to read a poem about someone who SEES beyond the exterior and looks at a beautiful heart. Lovely!!!
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13 posted 2003-03-12 08:03 PM


Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, you sure seem to behold her as beautiful.

Elizabeth

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

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14 posted 2003-03-12 09:11 PM


I wish I would meet a girl as you described some day.

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

[This message has been edited by Connel (03-12-2003 09:11 PM).]

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15 posted 2003-03-12 10:29 PM


it really is to bad that we can't see ourselves the way other people see us.  Great write.  
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16 posted 2003-03-12 10:33 PM


Very very beautifully done!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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17 posted 2003-03-13 11:42 AM


I know this person, and thank you for this, will show it to her.

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

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18 posted 2003-03-18 12:57 PM


If only more looked for a beauty beyond the obvious. *S* I like this very much! *S*
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19 posted 2003-03-18 10:30 PM


How wonderful that you love the book---and the cover!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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20 posted 2003-03-18 10:41 PM


I knew that girl, dated her even though the guys made guy remarks....And when I ran into her ten years later, wow! were those guys ever wrong......

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21 posted 2003-03-18 10:44 PM


A wonderful write. I see nothing of the rogue in this piece.
Thomas119gold
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22 posted 2003-03-19 08:57 AM


All rogues have a tender side we just don't admit it. LOL
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23 posted 2003-03-19 12:22 PM


Thomas, she may think the way I do when my
Love writes and tells me things like this....
I tell him all the time that love is blind.

But, don't  ever  quit writing or telling
her these sweet things, because we just
love  to keep hearing them.
Oh, and I think she will love to see this
one in the book, too....so,


(me going to vote)


"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-19-2003 12:24 PM).]

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24 posted 2003-03-30 06:02 PM


A person who sees what is there to be seen, and knows what he sees is good.  Well done.
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25 posted 2003-03-30 06:04 PM


Came back to vote because this is that good
and a pleasure to read over again and again.

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26 posted 2003-03-30 06:15 PM


My vote for you ... who sees such beauty and tells us graciously; true modesty is extremely fascinating.
Love, Margherita

Thomas119gold
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27 posted 2003-03-31 09:45 AM


Each one of you that has made a comment to me on this poem only adds to what I have written so thank you each and every one of you


Whiterose I am a Rogue though
Just a Romantic one

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28 posted 2003-04-13 05:48 PM


This is an insightful write and i thoroughly enjoyed and happily voted.
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29 posted 2003-04-13 11:52 PM


bump

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