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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2003-03-10 01:30 PM


So here I am again
I'm wondering where
You were lastnight
When you promised to call
So I find myself back
At this point
Where I don't want anything to do
With us
I hate this feeling
Of breaking down
When no one ever seems to be around
But you were supposed to be there
Like you used to
I know Yesterday is gone
Believe it or not
I have been moving on
But I'm feeling
A bit vulnerable
I assumed you
Would understand
I found myself
Shaking in my bed lastnight
But where were you
To comfort me
Oh I forgot
That's something you never do anymore
You keep on letting me down
Why, do I even bother
Oh I forgot
I thought I loved you
And had the audocity to assume
That you loved me
Honestly whatever right?
You had time for her
But what about me?
Seems like everyone has forgotten my needs
Especially you
I guess
I should listen to my skittish thoughts
And finally walk out on you
Thank you though
For showing me that you are just
Like all the rest
And that the love I'm longing for
Doesn't really exist
Now I'll go
And resume my thrown
As Ice Pryncess..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2003 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-03-10 03:11 PM


C - this is amazing - mannn can I relate to this - kind of like a feeling of in limbo - right - unsure whether to sit or run
Loved this xxoo for you  

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-03-10 03:54 PM


Thank you though
For showing me that you are just
Like all the rest
And that the love I'm longing for
Doesn't really exist

Oh these words..these ones.. I know these well..i thought for a breif moment that this was one of mine, that I'd written them..love this

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