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Open Poetry #25

A lesson in imagery

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

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Oregon

0 posted 2003-03-10 01:21 PM

I once knew a flower that flew in the sky
With shiny black petals that soared very high
It pooped on my hat
So much for éclat
I want four and twenty blackbirds baked in a pie

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-03-10 01:24 PM

Seems that your imagery needs no tweak on work,
four and twenty flowers flying in the sky?
My friend, of reading your poetry, I shall not shirk...
but I think I'll take a pass on your pie...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-10-2003 01:37 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-03-10 01:29 PM

(giggles in delight) How do you know it wasn't the raven from the chamber door? LOL! This is clever, sweet friend, who else likes plums, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-03-10 01:52 PM

Wonderful Ken!!
Oh you do rhyme superbly..may I take lessons?
~Smiles & Hugs to you my friend.~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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