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Winter Wine
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Winter Wine |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
Ice binds the river surfaces; Snow in front of buildings dances; Around three times the wine has gone; The sky is like a filled flagon. [This message has been edited by Goldboat (03-11-2003 01:21 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
an interesting image the sky as a filled flagon... I enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely penned. Much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Short and clever - good images. I like it!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) But really the wine is never gone, it only becomes the bubbly and dissolves all around you until the spring kicks in! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet You, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I suppose it says something about the lucidness of a culture or lack of, under a carpet of snow...I like the idea of it  |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
Sorry! A word was missed during my typing. I have added it right now. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I love the images, Goldboat. Very nice! *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
Thank you all! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This one fills me up. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed sipping this "Winter Wine"... Peace & Light, Earth Angel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Lovely images here |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Enjoyed this read.  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
Thanks to you all! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
How did i miss this? I enjoyed this again, You Wang Ge |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
imaginative + quite visual well done |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Goldboat - and the wine was tender... My vote for this... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Gold - you brought me right there - nice imagery . . . xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this out loud...James |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
kaile: Thank you! If you can read Chinese, I would like send you some poems by email. dreambuilder: Thank you for your words that you build my dream. Bill: Thank you for your vote! And, thanks to littlewing and JamesMichael! |
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