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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Throwing a line digging for cover sifting through meanings sorting the shapes shook by threats that sink to underground palace of prayers to cursing the brick along the lines too deep to determine which edge they belong deterministic methods symptoms not complete to throw me back into category deleted. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gemma...good write! Strong, decisive... no backing off! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thankyou sweet lady, for all your replies. look at your number of posts 333333! -sorry went off on a tangent. yes, you're very right.i'm feeling decisive and stubborn on a certain matter at the mo. for today. ha ha. i wont be tomorrow i bet. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Bump..excellent stuff gemma.. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Gemma  A very strong write, girl....  Hugs, Ethel Mae |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very nice, I rekky did love.  But im kinda sad right now..Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very well written gemma! Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
like how you constructed this, kind of anylitical, kind of tricky, but like it |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
leaves em wondering - excellent writing gem and nice form there too xxoo |
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