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Abandon Place at Sunrise
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Abandon Place at Sunrise |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Dim to brightening, Creep sight into the dankness, Sunrise now lighting, Casting back the full darkness, A broken window Allows the day to return back Recovers shadows Overtaking realms of black. Trash and window shards On creaking floors of old pine, A lost play card, An empty bottle of wine, A few nails and tacks, Old and shattered picture frames, A cold pool of wax, Photos of girls without names, And there’s so much more, Hiding where the dark protects, Treasures to explore Where society rejects. Gloom |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sounds like an old deserted hopuse. Is It? You described it very well...  Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! thanks for taking me there! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe I sneezed in the dust... you put us there, Professor, when you write. Not everyone can do that, but you do. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Where society rejects." I am thinking an abandoned house where the homeless hang out? |
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