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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-03-10 10:21 AM



There is sadness in the air surrounds
tears that dampen eyes and face,
the last of Winter bowing out,
only room for Spring's replace.

Daylight begins to linger on,
attaching to the sun's decline.
Yet time will pass too quickly 'til
the change of seasons becomes mine.

I feel it more each day's address.
Directly aimed to every sense.
Birds are singing come each morn,
as sunlight comes to my defense.

Releasing hold on saving-time.
Days will linger these thoughts in rhyme.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-03-10 11:56 AM


Maureen,
Good one, this is a keeper.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-03-10 12:06 PM


Wow! I love this time of year! I need longer days...good writing lady!
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2003-03-10 01:21 PM


Taking note of Spring is a wonderful thing.
Beautifully expressed.
Love, Margherita

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2003-03-10 08:34 PM


Thank you Seymour, your words always make me smile.

Thank you Dixie, I enjoy your upbeat responses

Thank you Margherita, it's a joy to read your responses.

I have appreciated each of you *s
hugsssss
Maureen

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