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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-03-10 09:38 AM



I never thought I'd see the day
I'd love you in every single way

The way your eyes sparkle when you smile
or how you'll just lay with me for awhile

I love teh way you raise your voice
when you are so happy you rejoice

I'd miss your laughter and your tears
thatwe've shared over all the years

I couldn't live without your touch
it shows how you care for me so much

All the silly little things you do
or just the way you whisper "kristiesue"

I never want my nightmare to come true
to see the day I must live without you

So while we have got a "you and me"
I'll make you the happiest you can be

Just never forget that I love you
and there's nothing for you I will not do

[This message has been edited by KristieSue (03-10-2003 09:41 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-03-10 12:23 PM


tugs at the heart strings....very touching writing, m'friend
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2 posted 2003-03-10 01:33 PM


Smooth and touching, enjoyed every bit of it.
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3 posted 2003-03-10 01:44 PM


Thanks you two! :-)

imagination (or memory too) is great...*sigh* LOL

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