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kaile
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singapore

0 posted 2003-03-10 07:47 AM


I plunged into
last week's conversation,
so confident that
our shared knowledge
would prevail
Your puppyish lost look
forced me to phrase my question better

have I just inherited
my father's nasty habit
of never stating clearly what he means
or have I placed our friendship
too soon on the pedestal,
mistaken that our minds are not
quite in sync yet?

I'll like to get an answer from you
so that I can either blame
my linguistic incompetence on my genes
or sheepish remind myself to CHILL, CHILL

tell me
which side of my personality
I'm facing in the mirror

© Copyright 2003 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-03-10 07:55 AM


kaile - I loved this - right in my head this morning you are - nice writing indeed xxoo
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-03-10 07:55 AM


Nice writing...enjoyed...James
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2003-03-10 08:06 AM


kaile
I'm sure this will get an answer.
Well done.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-03-10 12:27 PM


well, let me know if you find out...I need to know it too
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