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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-03-10 07:45 AM

I Remember You

When you're young and in love
don't let her get away from you.
Because you might spend the rest of your life
missing the good times the two of you once knew.
So take my advise and make her your wife.
Your life will be so much better
then the one's that lost their young love
and now live in regret knowing they
will never forget her.

JamesLee
March10
2003
© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-03-10 07:53 AM

Goodness James - yes - is better to have tried than to wonder - very nice xxoo
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-03-10 08:10 AM

James,
Enjoyed, but there are two sides to that coin. LOL
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-03-10 12:26 PM

hugs
Margherita
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4 posted 2003-03-10 01:09 PM

Seymour is right! See what's in the NOW.
But don't we all remember someone!
Beautiful anyway.
Margherita
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-03-10 03:46 PM

Thank you littlewing, Seymour, passing shadows and Margherita...James
Suetang
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6 posted 2003-03-10 05:37 PM

Hello James

I'm sure there are many who would agree with your words.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-03-11 06:23 AM

Thanks Sue...I was just thinking about my old girlfriend Billy...that put some pressure on me to marry her after she graduated from high school and I felt like I was too young...she moved away and I never saw her again...James
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8 posted 2003-03-11 05:07 PM

enjoyed
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9 posted 2003-03-11 05:13 PM

Enjoyed this with a sad smile. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-04-17 04:56 PM

thanks vandana and Nightshade for the nice responses...James
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