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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-03-09 05:11 PM

I gaze at her words and she becomes the Queen of my attention
When her poetry is displayed it gains all of my affection
My hopes and desires reflect an amber glow
Everyday I hope she will know of my true wish
If it be granted my focus will be fixed to the one and only
POETIC NYMPH

© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-03-09 10:28 PM

This is so sweet. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

majnu

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since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2003-03-09 11:53 PM

sounds more like the opening of a longer poem. like hesiod calling on the muses

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nice.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-03-10 01:47 AM

hmmmm....what's next?

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

4 posted 2003-03-10 08:33 AM

Only time will tell

Ladies_Rogue
New Member

since 2003-03-06

Posts 7
Mississippi

5 posted 2003-03-10 02:26 PM

Maybe this is why you have an itch
LOL
Henry

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